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A DESCRIPTION OF SOMEONE YOU KNOW WELL

He is Luis and he is 21 years old. He is from Belgium

He has an open chararacter but sometimes he is shy and he seems confident

He likes humanities, history and languages best. He likes rock music and different types of music. He goes out with his friends at the weekend when he doesn’t have to work and he plays football, volleyball, ping pong, swimming....He comes to our school because he wants to learn our language and customs. He comes to school with his friend and another teacher. He likes to play the guitar, reading, listening to music, travelling and watching films after school

By Jaime Domínguez Caro

4º ESO A

 

 

 MY BOY-FRIEND


I have a boy-friend,his name is Juan Jose.He is twenty-four
years old.His family:his mother is Inma,his father is Antonio
and his sister is Maria del Amor.He’s from Valverde del
Camino.
He’s a very good person,nice,relaxed,very funny,generous,
sensitive,friendly and he’s my best-friend.He’s brown,
slim,good-looking,medium height and he has green-eyes.
He loves hunting and fishing.
He likes listening to music,staying in,going to aconcerts because he loves hip hop music and he dislikes
pop music and studiying because it is boring.He
is interested in the country because it is beautiful and silent
By Amanda Tocino 4º B

WRITING A FORMAL LETTER

 

C/ Atalaya blq 4º

C.P. 21660

Minas de Riotinto

Tuesday 8 November 2007

 

 

Peter Walters

Holidays Camp International

23, Bond Street

London W12

Dear MR. Walters

I am writing to you because I am interested in working as a children’s holiday camp monitor this summer. I am fifteen years old and I live in Riotinto. I like babies and children, I have experience as a babysitter. I enjoy sports and games and I am very good at swimming and at running , I don’t mind working and speaking long hours. I don’t like losing my time and I hate reading . I think watching films is fun and washing-up is boring. Could you please send me more information and application form?

Yours sincerely

Carlos

 

9 comentarios

[jordan 1 flight low - 20 de agosto de 2010 - 02:54]

Distance makes the hearts grow fonder. Look into my eyes - you will see what you mean to me. I need you like I need the air to breathe.

[ines y estefania - 15 de noviembre de 2007 - 10:17]

jaime you story is very good and interesting.the story is funny and very very difficult.

[VICTOR Y VICENTE - 15 de noviembre de 2007 - 10:03]

For Jaime Domingez:
you composision is very very boring and you can´t write a story.
YOU ARE VERY SWOT

[Félix y M.Carmen 4º B - 15 de noviembre de 2007 - 10:02]

Dear Carlos,

You haven't written this letter.Someone wrote it for you!
your teacher in the evening classes.
This letter is too good for you,you aren't very intelligent.We wish you good luck in the exam.

[amanda tocino - 15 de noviembre de 2007 - 09:57]

hi,Luis is very nice,I like him,he doesn't explain very well and him spanish isn't very well but I understand him.

[josue y bea - 15 de noviembre de 2007 - 09:54]

Jaime your composition is very good.You are a swot and intelligent.We like your composition because it is the truth.THANK YOU.

[carlos - 15 de noviembre de 2007 - 09:51]

jaime your composition is very bad and you have no idea about english. In irlanda there are only hippies and posh.bye bye.

[Dani Gallego 4º A - 15 de noviembre de 2007 - 09:00]

Carlos Ramirez, Is the letter yours or have they written it for you?

[Miguel Angel y Jaime - 15 de noviembre de 2007 - 08:45]

Carlos your compositions is very bad and boring.You have no idea about writing English.So you are very good at running no?jaja